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Amazing writing in both parts of this chapter
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Another great chapter - love the idea of the buff college swimmer in his tiny white suit....
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The Last Chapter.....
Joe and I grabbed some fresh coffee and went in his hot tub when we got back to the condo. The sky was still crystal clear and the weather was warming up to a very unseasonably warm day. I thought about the fact that I was still in the white suit, but the tub was too tempting to worry about changing. I laid back, my feet touching Joe’s.
“You should come over to this side,” I suggested. “We can both watch the beach.” Joe slid across and sat next to me. We took it all in as we watched the start to fill with people. It was going to be a busy day. Even the pool deck was getting full. We sat together for about 20 minutes. Every once in a while we’d rub hands against each other’s legs, but nothing more. “Nothing like a warm, sunny day to bring out the crowd,” Joe commented. “We probably should get out there and stake our claim.” “Yeah,” I said as I started to stand up. My suit was now clinging to me and, of course, the white was being overtaken by the flesh of my skin beneath. “Certainly no modesty in that suit.” Joe was checking me out as I climbed over the wall. He was right, on the front side you could see everything. I tugged the material out a bit, which helped some, but it was still sheer. Joe climber out and came up beside me. “We’ll keep that as our private time suit,” he whispered in my ear. I smiled back at him. “Maybe I’ll just leave it here for next time.” “I’m glad there will be a next time,” Joe replied. We changed, me into a really awesome black and gold print Tyr suit. Joe into his blue and gold suit from the first time we met at the pool. We put together our stuff and headed out the door for the beach. Joe and I remained friends for years after that. The white suit remained at his condo, just as I promised it would. And yes, we had many “next times” there. The end. |
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I liked your story's ending, it wrapped up everything with no loose ends.
Thank You for all of your stories, Brian |
#85
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So sad to see this story end!! Thanks for all the hard work, it was a great read!!
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Thank you very much STS for all the hard work !
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Enjoyed this story from start to finish! Thanks for sharing it with us!
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